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    vietnamese poet
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  • Last Activity: 03-17-2009 06:51 AM
  • Join Date: 05-01-2008
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Posted 02-10-2009 at 08:28 AM Comments 4
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PLease sir, my moons and stars yet to be born
In the coming nights that have no joy but gloom.
I am an unwed mom and victim of yours,
Searching to live till my hummingbird ceases singing.
My days, ahead, are distant from me,
And the hours of mourning are within reach.
Do not use me now, but spare my life from the evil of coition;
Tomorow I might not live anymore
Because I carry the deadly disease from you and your colleagues;
Oh, pLease...

Posted 02-06-2009 at 09:05 PM Comments 0
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The huge black veil of space unfolds;
Tiny balls in fiery orange scintillate
While the bigger ones sparkle teal.
They spin and dance in a circle,
Uwaware of their timeless happiness.

IN the center of this circle,
A moon blazes in emerald green;
She gazes at each dancer in amazement,
Yearning to join in till her flame totally fades.

Now and then the comets whizz by,
Brushing their indigo tails against the sky,...

Posted 01-22-2009 at 09:08 AM Comments 0
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Every sky in the morning is blue like the ocean,
Floating high above lands like celestial seas.
Birds and bees cannot soar that high,
Only the beautiful, heavenly sky.

When darkness comes, it changes to black,
And when there is rain, a flamboyant rainbow blazes.
When winter arrives, snow covers it,
Then, when summer comes, I fall in love with its succulent taste.

Every sky at crepuscule is lavender and orange,
Pulsating...

Posted 01-16-2009 at 08:03 PM Comments 0
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Limping hearts, on a valiant battlefied.
They have stopped singing for the nurses to mend;
For days without joyful music,
Limping hearts, now, are wounded and weak.

Their nation longs to hear their voices,
Instead has listened to the explosions of bombs.
Limping hearts lie still on crimson soil,
Awaiting to inhale the first jingle of Noel.

Winter, soon to creep home--
From a long journey through a deadly storm.
...

Posted 12-11-2008 at 12:46 AM Comments 0
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Below zero in a refrigerator,
I sat in a fetal position,
Trembled like a wet wren,
Yearning to feel the blazing flame of summer.
Teeth chatting with those brain neurons,
Fist clenching, not able to move,
Hypothermia began to set in,
My cells were paralyzed by the monster.
My heart, a sleeping dove,
Silenced and tranquilized,
Each heart beat longed to dance
But the hideous snowflakes forbad it.
Recent Comments
Think the individal is so depressed that suicide is the only option and carries the additional happy result that such trash will not continue to be published.
tritan - please consider it seriously.
Posted 05-30-2009 at 03:03 PM by Jorge1907 Jorge1907 is offline
Very instresting
Posted 02-13-2009 at 05:08 PM by *vampire* *vampire* is offline
Wow - that was moving...
Posted 02-12-2009 at 01:46 AM by Ben Burkhill Ben Burkhill is offline
suburbs - spell check...
Posted 02-11-2009 at 12:24 AM by Jorge1907 Jorge1907 is offline
groan - anyone writing such doggerel deserves severe punishment!...
Posted 02-11-2009 at 12:21 AM by Jorge1907 Jorge1907 is offline

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