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Memnon 06-17-2010 05:55 PM

The last remaining....
 
He stood up, feeling numb.
The rain dripping down his face, mixed with the blood from his wounds.
He felt nothing and his mind was blank.
The rain was not enough to wash the destruction that had occurred.
A distant thunder clap carried him back through the horrors of his past. Flashes of pain, screams of the dead and the voice that lead him to this path was now running through his mind.

Slowly he smiled.

He was Immortal…

Once he came to the present, he took some time to remember where he was.
For there was no difference in the landscape before him, it no longer looked the way it had…
There were no lush green forests or great cities…
It was now a barren landscape…
And the remains are still rotting…
At that moment he thought of the power he held…
The reasons for all of this would never be known or justified…
What ever the goals were, it was over.
All that was left was him. There was nothing left to conquer.
There was no to one defeat. The world was his…
But the world was empty…

Immortality had come at a price…
He never foresaw that he would be the last to remain…

Symptom777 06-22-2010 07:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Memnon (Post 452136)
his mind was blank

An autobiography hidden amongst the semiliterate ramblings. How quaint!

Memnon 06-23-2010 12:21 PM

i know that suspense cannot be felt by lepers like you....

Memnon 06-23-2010 12:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Symptom777 (Post 452311)
Oh divine lord! forgive me.
pity my vile disease.i knew not that it was not about you.
i am not into literature and also into suspense.my ego is to high you see.
i am a piece of garbage and nothing else.so look upon me with humiliation.
for i am the humiliation of the entire human race.i beg you to forgive me

ok!!

alright....

you scum bag....i forgive thee...

no go you son of thee cunt...


GO!!!!.....

Big Cat 06-23-2010 04:32 PM

Quote:

A distant thunder clap
1. A thunderclap in the distance would be more of a rumble and not a clap.

2. It's thunderclap, not thunder clap.

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o...5081448604.jpg

But anyway, INTERESTING story.

Memnon 06-27-2010 05:04 AM

I thank you for correcting me and i salute you for appreciating a soldiers short story...http://www.windchaserkennels.com/Mal...y/twilight.jpg

PoseidonsNet 06-27-2010 07:48 PM

wheres the short story?

Big Cat 06-27-2010 10:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PoseidonsNet (Post 452387)
wheres the short story?

A *soldier's* short story, not his short story, is what he said.

http://www.perthstreetbikes.com/5535...nal-poster.jpg

Memnon 06-28-2010 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Symptom777 (Post 452311)
nope i don't speak it with the rest of my kind....
the cunt clan does not speak it.I am the only exception
twat.

well good for you....

bitch

Big Cat 06-28-2010 12:23 AM

Don't insult Symptom [unnecessarily] or I insult you.

It's how The Game is played.

http://www.funnycorner.net/funny-pic.../The-game.jpeg

Memnon 06-28-2010 12:30 AM

there is no game that can be lost .....

for in a game neither side loses any thing....

but in battle....

for mere fools like you....

even losing is glory to shine throughout your entire life....

for you can tell everyone that you once fought with .....

and lost to a winner.....

Memnon 06-28-2010 12:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Big Cat (Post 452400)
ouch.... help....!!! OK man that seriously hurts my feelings. you are right i am such a fat obnoxious cat

http://barnsdale.files.wordpress.com...te-fat-cat.jpg


ya what ever loser cat ....

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_qJmYuKjmdh...ree+Online.jpg

in frost cloud....

feel proud...

Memnon 06-28-2010 12:45 AM

oh and symptom goes and post what ever the fuck on my thread....

and i have the right to say what ever the fuck that i want to him....

i didn't know that feeble cunt like symptom needed a fat piece of shit like you....

to guard him...

go get some sardines and watch traffic....

loser cat....

Big Cat 06-28-2010 02:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Memnon
go get some sardines and watch traffic....

loser cat....

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e3...d/butthurt.png

Memnon 06-28-2010 03:44 AM

wow you are anakin....

i thought you were a effing cat that just effing kisses ass...

but now you showed be otherwise....

you are just a small kid "my butt hurts"....

and i say go to mama


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