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Old 12-18-2008, 12:21 AM
tritran tritran is offline
Join Date: May 2008
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Red face where are my poems

Where are my poems
That shine days and nights?
Sestinas and ghazals, alike,
They long to fly with the comets,

Where are my trioltes and haikus
That glow in darkness and seep during mornings?
My past poems, my current dreams...
Now,forever, lost... thank to you!
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Old 12-18-2008, 04:38 AM
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Ben Burkhill Ben Burkhill is offline
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Location: The land of Aus
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Here they are - you should post in this section of the cloud via this link above as I think you have talent - welcome to the cloud tritran.
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Old 12-21-2008, 01:20 PM
Jorge1907 Jorge1907 is offline
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It's doggerel but if ben thinks you have talent - well, not much more to be said. You see ben is an author or will be as soon as he finishes his fictional book (all the fictional proceeds will go to the real poor and needy).
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Old 12-22-2008, 04:02 PM
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There once was a man so wise
he jumped into a sandy place
and burned out both his eyes
and when he knew his eyes were gone
he offered no complaint
he summoned up a vision
and made himself a saint
-Frank Herbert
Do not presume to judge me or the methods I choose to employ. You cannot comprehend the magnitude of the tasks I have undertaken, or the consequences of my failure.

Some may question your right to destroy ten billion people. Those who understand realize that you have no right to let them live.

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