Post-a-poem

[kyman]

Anyone feel free to post a poem of your own, or another you life, about whatever you wish. I wanted to see what people were writing about here on frostcloud. I can't believe some of the people I've met online here. The intelligence is quite humbling. Poetry is always a joy for me to read, and I'd be grateful to anyone who has something to share. And feel free to discuss or set up your poem.

If you don't want to post, that's cool too. Enjoy the read (if anyone posts)!.

[Sparky]

I'm gonna back kyman up on this. We simple people can't come up with the beautify words that ya'll writing type can so please entertain us.

(kyman I don't mean nothing by calling you simple, hell I think you're one of the best here on FrostCloud)
I was just pleading to DevilBuni, elciepbvg, and others who I know can write good.

P.S. I know its supossed to say 'well'
P.S.S. for the record I know 'ya'll' ain't a word
P.S.S.S. I know 'ain't' ain't exactly a word either
P.S.S.S.S. I know all this P.S. stuff ain't proper either.

[kyman]

Sparky, I bar you from posting any more on my thread. Your in my world now!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. Yes, never use P.S., its for losers!
P.S.S. No offense taken. And I am not that much of a writer when it comes to poetry, but I do type some. I might post a little if more people get involved.
P.S.S.S. Post people! If you ever had something you wanted to say, say it now. People are listening!

[kyman]

And thanks for backing me up Spark. I can always use a helping hand.

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i really like the symmetry in the poetry
it's shape is like a landscape of pine trees
and bees coming after me's

damn, my rhyming sucks too
yes, it's true
and now I feel oh so blue

i really like sparky's bye-line
i think he arrived just in time
and kyman too
but he came just before you

i feel so humiliated
that i have not infiltrated
a ring around the poesy
i blush and look a little rosey

[musicman30mm]

I''l give it a shot:

As fridgid white falls,
to blanket the frozen land,
colors of autumn give way,
to winters frosty plan.

But spring will soon reprise,
last summers brightest day,
Ra will reclaim his throne,
as children resume their play.

Reminds me of home in beautiful Minnesota. The seasons are very pronounced there.

Musicman, you are too good for the beginners thread. Now my new one looks extra crapy after yours!

every time I sweat
i feel all wet
sticky too
like human glue
made out of dew

[kyman]

not what i expected
this tower of posts now erected
wait, did i just say erected in a poem
i feel worse off than a special ed kid, without a home

misfit, do you like bisquick
it doesn't matter, i like your style
the rhyming isn't good, but it is quick
and lame, but inspires smiles

i dare any fool to step to my game
i rock frostcloud, and you are lame
this poetry here, is the deepest you'll ever read
so stear clear, or invite my wrath, if you please

[kyman]

This thread is turning into something strange. Help. Someone. lol

This is hilarious. I wonder what kolriss or symptom would write here.

[kyman]

Nice musicman. That's great. But I dare say, you owe me and misfit thanks for making you look so good. No offense to myself and misfit, of course.

[kyman]

Misfit, you and I rock. We should write something like dante's infirno, all in rhyme. We would make billions. I promise!

[InoIdontno]

Can I get in on the inferno?
I'll bring a can of Sterno
and light the gel
it'll get hot as hell
And Dante would feel the...burno?

[Michael. A]

Hmmmmmm...........I think.........Therefore.....I..................Thi nk I need................. something..........Umm.......yeahh....Let the ideas flow.

[kyman]

Well put well said.

Award for most unique rhyme sceme goes to M.A

I told you this got weird. Man, we scared away all the legitimate artists. Their just jealous. Their ego is quaking before us. No wait...that's just gas.

kyaman and misfit rock
because they don’t give a flying fock
they both sit around and talk
writing it all down with white chalk


InoIdontno dante’s infern-o
is it something i must learn-o
or can i fake it
and the money, i’ll just take it
while you make it


michael a. your the man
that just came back from japan
did you get a nice tan
on your trip to japan
your the man
that may be tan


musicman makes misfit and kyman look sucky
musicman is just lucky
that kyman and misfit are pretending they are
not
at
all that bad at poetry


sparky is a baker
and a maker
of all sorts of things
like onion rings
and cheesy things
sparky is a baker
that's why he is a maker
and a trainer of the baker that bakes
bread