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Old 07-08-2008, 05:35 PM
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Old 07-09-2008, 03:35 AM
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slowly comes
an empty feeling
the heart numbs
with stomach reeling
so I sell my soul
to plug a hole
and pay the price
for this vice
with nothing to trump
this need to pump
its crude and crass
to pay 4 bucks for gas
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Old 07-09-2008, 10:10 AM
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slowly comes
an empty feeling
the heart numbs
with stomach reeling
so I sell my soul
to plug a hole
and pay the price
for this vice
with nothing to trump
this need to pump
its crude and crass
to pay 4 bucks for gas


However 4 bucks is somewhat cheaper
If you lived in the UK your pockets would need to be deeper.
So if 4 Bucks is making you weep,
Have a thought for the English as 4 bucks sounds quite cheap.

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Old 07-10-2008, 06:03 AM
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the arms embrace
a comforting clench when the eyes loose
salty drips

hands become tied upon realization
back and forth
i simply should have said
im sorry

salty drips are flowing off,
then some unknown hand wiped it of,
Don't know why I feel
that I won't fall,
when some one is there to hold.
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Old 07-11-2008, 12:51 PM
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However 4 bucks is somewhat cheaper
If you lived in the UK your pockets would need to be deeper.
So if 4 Bucks is making you weep,
Have a thought for the English as 4 bucks sounds quite cheap.
haha true

Misery is relative.
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Old 08-21-2008, 07:40 PM
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Is a God,
who walks on water,
turns water to wine,
is descended from heaven above,
is the child of the children of the great flood,
whose ancestor parted the red sea,
who warns of the next great flood,

is a fisher of men,
and preaches
that to save a soul
is akin to saving drowning men,
or being swallowed by a whale...

Who talks of Leviathan,
and his priests are Levites,
whose meekness is as mild as a child,
who commands the storms
of the oceans wild...

Who is the symbol
of the age of pisces,
the twin little fish:
that can feed five thousand,
whether through miracle, charity, guilt,
or natures metaphoric normal reproduction,

who is followed by the age of aquarius,
the water bringer, an old Sky God, and
this Father's wrath and destruction...


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Old 08-21-2008, 07:47 PM
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salty drips are flowing off,
then some unknown hand wiped it of,
Don't know why I feel
that I won't fall,
when some one is there to hold.

as clouds dissipate
sun shines so bright
chrome reflections mixed with royal blue
soft, lightly scented, cool breeze
breathing in
i am mountain


nothing, everything
the void is immeasurable
too many to count
webs entangle to realize
i will never die
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Old 08-22-2008, 02:48 AM
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LORD BYRON

O WILL GO NO MORE A ROVIN SO LATE UNTO THE NIGHT
THOU THE HEART BE STILL AS LOVING AND THE MOON BE STILL AS BRIGHT FOR THE SWORD OUT WEARS THE SHEATH
AND THE SOUL WEARS OUT THE HEART
THE BREAST MUST PAUSE TO BREATH
AND LOVE ITSELF MUST REST
FOR THE NIGHT WAS MADE FOR LOVING
AND THE DAY RETURNS TO SOON
OWE WILL GO NO MORE A ROVIN
BY THE LIGHT OF THE MOON
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Old 08-22-2008, 03:38 AM
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Old 09-08-2008, 04:12 AM
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I'm comes back with blessed
all of images sames
like the one
drawing a line from me to you
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Old 09-11-2008, 04:42 PM
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feels like something regained.
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Old 09-12-2008, 02:51 AM
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feels like something regained.
God make me comes back to you safety
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Old 09-14-2008, 12:19 PM
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Nice poems, here.

zouzou, you have such poetic imagery. Tilt it into simplification and it will be quite brilliant.
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Old 09-14-2008, 12:28 PM
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The Mystery of Both Ways

standing still
both ways
between two mirrors
between two mirrors

eternal love
reflected both ways
between two mirrors
between two mirrors
between two mirrors

between two mirrors
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Old 09-14-2008, 12:33 PM
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